We hear the word
"globalization" over and over . It's a controversial subject . Globalization
has spanked one of the most highly
charged debates of the past decades. Some people argue that globalization is
the perfect system for this world and a result of human evolution. A lot of
people , including me , believe that this so- called globalization has many other purposes
different from globalizing
Globalization is supposed to reflect internationalism
, mixture of cultures ,interchanging information and knowledge , … etc . These may have actualized in an almost remarkable way .However, at the
same time , it caused the losing of identity. The so-called globalization is
deleting nations' privacy , costumes , and values . It emphasizes selfishness
and forsaking every matter . Therefore, this causes the losing of belonging to
a country ! Globalization is a world without countries . It's the world of institutions
The dangers of globalization , economically , First ,
20% of world countries possess 85% of world's savings . Second, An American dominance
on world's economy by terminating the control of a country on its own economy .
Therefore , the country becomes under the mercy of International Monetary Fund.
In addition , one of the dangers of globalization , socially, spread material culture
and consumer culture
Proponents of globalization with all its disadvantages
claim that "for the first time ever , number of poor people is declining
everywhere " . Let's dig deeper and see .. if one sticks to the 1981-2008 period , China
is the key ; Between 1981-2008 the entire drop in the number of people living
in extreme poverty , those who live below 1 $ a day , is accounted for by China
– where the number of extreme poor fell by 662 millions . Over this period ,
the number of people living below 1 $ a day outside China actually rose sharply
throughout this period. The gab between rich and poor has indeed become more
glaring in recent decades
Also proponents of globalization with all its
disadvantages claim that "globalization is the extract of eastern and
western civilizations and cultures" . While globalization has risen from
the west and has a western nature ! The purpose of it is to generalize its notions , values , culture , .. etc under the mask of
"internationalism" . Globalization is a new form of colonization but
this time it's not colonizing of land , it's colonizing of conscience
In conclusion , globalization is an inevitable
phenomenon which we should all be aware of . I'm not an opponent of technology
or internationalism . I'm just saying that globalization has more meanings and
purposes under its veil. Globalization has a lot of important advantages , no
one can deny that . Nevertheless, there are tens of disadvantages and dangers
economically , culturally , and civilizationally.
Good evening miss Amal
ReplyDeleteI read your essay about GLOBALIZATION and I agree with must of what you had written, but I really think you hadn't been fair with the globalization in your article.
Do not misbehave understanding what I mean because I am with doing everything from the Islam point of view.
You hardly mention the advantages of globalization and you used very hurtful and repulsive words.
Good evening Mr. Kkalid,
DeleteThank you for reading my essay . I understood what do you mean.
well, It's an argumentative essay which you should convince the reader with your idea by telling you point and refute others' points and reasons
I didn't mention the advantages because , first It would be more like a (compare-and-contrast essay ) second , my viewpoint is that "the disadvantages are more than the advantages and that we must look deeper " so by mentioning the advantages that will not help me to express and emphasis my viewpoint ! .I hope you understand what I mean.
Thanks again
Hello again =)
ReplyDeleteI don't want to be rude
But the compare-and-contrast essay presents the similarities and differences between tow or more things or situations; ( like the compare-and-contrast essay about THE BEATELES VS ROLLING STONES "level 5" if you remember).
In argumentative essay, we not only give information but also present an argument with the PROS (supporting ideas) and CONS (opposing ideas) of an argumentative issue the way that readers can tell if you are with or against.
I am sorry if I accidentally disrespect your intellectual.....
Good evening ,
DeleteFor the argumentative essay I agree with what you said and this is called the first style as teacher Anwar taught us in level 5 and there is the second style which is to mention in the body paragraphs your ideas and support them but in the last body paragraph you mention the opposing ideas and refute them in the same paragraph , if you remember .
And I think I followed the second style in this essay
Thanks again for your opinion
no need for sorry , I really appreciate your opinion.